Definitely one of your best – because it is about me… I look forward to the Schwinn because they sold out man! Your prophesy reminded me to set aside some Vaseline for my grease-doomed chin. Will it still take 3 days? damn.
Kind of creepy...don't eat me! Sounds like she's trying to hide her life, or her past life, and herself, or in essence - hide in a hole. Am I right? Do I get the poem analyzing prize?
Barb, my guess is, that it is in the starving. She consumes to keep. And no matter how much she eats, which is everything, she is still hungry. Question is hungry for what? The hiding is the hiding of the need.
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wow! that girl has one big appetite!
that is awesome!
Definitely one of your best – because it is about me… I look forward to the Schwinn because they sold out man! Your prophesy reminded me to set aside some Vaseline for my grease-doomed chin. Will it still take 3 days? damn.
good heavens. terribly creative.
Kind of creepy...don't eat me! Sounds like she's trying to hide her life, or her past life, and herself, or in essence - hide in a hole. Am I right? Do I get the poem analyzing prize?
I do like it though - very descriptive.
Barb, my guess is, that it is in the starving. She consumes to keep. And no matter how much she eats, which is everything, she is still hungry. Question is hungry for what? The hiding is the hiding of the need.
Is that correct? Anyone?
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